my naskah drama “the black book”

 The Black Book

By: Tia Dwi Risani

Characters :Me
                  Tia’s father
                  Tia’s Mother
                  Angel (Wahyu)
                  Devil (Dwiki)
                  Haneen
                  Hanan
Plot :

The life is going exactly Allah planned, but why i not life with the condition which i want. How cruel this world, even to got happiness so hardly to me. I’m as decision marker for my life, who is Allah? can he make my life be going better than right now? or would you give me the reason why i must believed him, even i never met hin. it’s like so crazy! “my eyes still wet, cannot stop crying , life it’s not fear. AHHH..... (scream loud) this happened after  my parents always forced me to be good , but she or he never give me what i want, expecially in prayer.

Settings : (school, classroom, Tia’s house , sideroad, mousque)

Tia’s mother    : hey wake up! Already midday, why you always wake up late and leave the prayers.

Me                   : Mmmm... wait

Tia’s Father     : cmon wake up! Can you see  the clock what time it’s now?

Angel              : please wake up tia, it almost midday , wake up and prepare to go to school.

Devil               : AHHHH just sleep tia, school not really importaint. Aren’t  you not bored?

  Everyday go  to school. I give you blanket, please use.

Tia’s Father     : wake up. Can you hear me? “PLAAAk , open the door”

Me                   : alright. Be patient i will wake up

Angel              : Don’t be angry, just wake up

Devil               : Hah  why  you wake up even it’s so noisy,  He dirstrub your sleep

Tia’s mother    : take a bath and this is your money. Becareful honey, hope you enjoy at school

Me                   : Yes

            Hardly to  go, but i should  go  to school with my ugly bicycle. Then  I pass the sideroad..suddenly

Haneen             : hello good morning tia? What do you think if we go to school together, with use my

                         My motorcycle?

Devil               : no, see how the way she ask you to join with her motorcycle, it’s like disparaging u.

Me                   : no need, i can use my bicycle. You can go away

Haneen            : it’s no matter if i ask you to join? You may come late . look my watch, it’s too late

                         If you use your bicycle

Devil               : cmon she is kind and her right, you can come late. Just accept the invitation cmonn

Me                   : i still can pedal my bicycle, please go away. If you stay in here, you also come late

                         Like me

Haneen            : alright, i’m awating you at school

            At  07.30 A.M, the time fast away. I know, teachers already waiting me infront of door. And ban me to come, because i late

Haneen            : hi. You already arrived, where you go? Please come to our class

Me                   : Hmm . class you means?\

Haneen            : It’s oke, i already inform  to our teacher that you come late because your bicycle

                           broke  Sorry if i little bit lie about that

Me                   : it’s better if you don’t care about my affairs

Hanee              : i just want to help you, you my friends.

Devil               : Leave her, cmon we  go . don’t come to the class

Me                   : i should go, stopp to care with me

     BLUBUUKKK........

Me                   : Can you use your eyes ? Don’t make me get agry to you

Hanan              : Sorry, but you hit me first?

Me                   : Close your mouth! shut up

Haneen            : Tiaaaa. Comeback please.

Hanan              : what happend to her? Doesnt come to class again? How many warn letters from

                           Teacher you saved. She should realize, you have helped a lot her

Haneen            : we should be patient toward her

Angel              : it’s better if you comeback to school, your parents will sad if see you like this

Me                   : Who is my parents? They are only busy with their affairs, only with money they can

                          Feel delightful, sometimes they are war each other, and never care and want to

                          Know about me.

Devil               : Exactly, they are not your parents. Not good parents to you

The sun is rising , i pedal the bicycle untill i arrive at my home

Me                   : Blukk           

Tia’s mother    : can you say greeten? You like haven’t attitude

Me                   : “i pass her, and i don’t care about she say”

Tia’s mother    : i talk to you. Please hear me!

Tia’s Father     : hey, where you go? Have you did prayer?

Me                   : Prayer? Both of you kidding me? stopp want to know about my life, and you as a

                           Father, even you never teach me about  prayer, and you always leave prayer, so?

                           I should hear your advise to me?

Devil               : Got job dearrr, so awesome. Just continue

Tia’s mother    : stopped! Keep your mouth

Tia’s Father     : even i never teach you or i leave my prayer, don’t be like me. please hear your

                          Parents

Me                   : don’t forced me to do prayer if they are never give good influences to me!

Tia’s Father     : “SLAPPED” respect to your dad.

            So i can’t stop to crying, even i doubt who is care with my life again?

Angel              : take ablution, you should know that Allah always be there for you. As well answer

                         Your du’a

Me                   : Who is Allah? Where he at the situation like this?

SOMEONE CALL

Hanan              : Please answer my call, “ hello are you there?”

Me                   : Ya. What’s up? It’s not a great time to debate about something, i can’t answer your

                          Call

Hanan              : sorry for before, if u have time, can we meet at mousque near by our school,

                          At 5 p.m

Devil               : Don’t care with his, your bed so comfortable. Rather than you go to mousque it’s

                          Better you sleep.

Angel              : cmon tia, meet him. Probably he can help you to overcome your probllems

At 5 p.m

Tia’s Mother    : where are you going?

Me                   : “JUST SILENT AND GO AWAY!”

I’m walking to pass the sideroad, and look arround when i stand. I don’t know certain what is happend to my life. What’s going on. Sudden my eyes foccus with an object, the son stand in sideroad with his news. I decide to meet him, how really shock   me, even he with worst condition still aware and believe that Allah has good planned , still patient

Hanan              : Finally you come!

Me                   : Hm ya

Hanan              : Sorry, what happent to you, not look well, are you cry?

Me                   : NO, i really good. So, why you want to meet me? there is something importaint

Hanan              : i know your not with good condition, for a long time i create a good time to meet

                          And talk to you.  You good girl, and i’m sure it’s not real you. So? If you have a lot

                          Of problems. Don’t worry to tell to me.

Me                   : Thank you for your kindness. And i know you a good boy too. But i have a lot of

                          Mistakes for someone who even my parents

Hanan              : There is no people in the biggest world haven’t mistake. And me as well . But you

                           Have time to changed, God hear every your du’a. If you got problems god do that

                           Because he is loving you and want you more near with him. It’s no means he not

                           Care to you.

Me                   : i know now, really thaks a lot for your advice, right now i need time to realizing.

Hanan              : If you necessary something want to tell. I’ll be there for you.

Angel              : Tia, Allah has good planned more than you know, so till has good preseption to him

Me                   : Even my names  always write down on your black book for all my mistakes and

                          Expecially unbelieve him. Can Allah forgive me?

Evil                  : what are doing ? don’t think like that, Allah it’s impossible. Where is he at the time

                          You got some problems?

Angel              : Allah always hear your du’a. Even the black book full of your name. But, he still

                          Called you “devotee”  with the smothly sound

Me                   : I give up, i’m AS arrogant human being, now i aware, Allah always able to care to

                          All his devotee without exeption. For give me Allah.

Note: a little bit based on my true story. I only tell to you guys. If your parents can’t carry you to near by Allah, she/he always leave the prayer but she/he want you never do same like them. It’s signal from Allah that you must make the best part for your life with prayer, even your family not really support you. Sent the du’a . Allah always hear, and someday hidayah will be comes.